Some individuals are of the opinion that music is considered to bring people from part of the world as well as different groups together. I agree that music has a strong power to help us to unite from various cultures and generations.
On the one hand, music plays a crucial role in our lives. From ancient times, music was a vital part of most cultures, whether in celebration, entertainment, festivals, and even funeral. For instance, ancient Greeks educated their children, both girls, and boys, in music from a young age. Besides that, music is an art form that connects a variety of people together. It is not uncommon to see the live concert appealed to the number of people around the world who watched it enthusiastically, in spite of different age groups and gender.
On the other hand, music is enjoyed by any generation, from the infant to the old aged person even though the taste of music depends on the genres. For instance, the youngsters tend to prefer to listen to pop music while the old aged person loves any kind of preferences. But when the anthem is played, all the children and adults turn into the same emotions because there is a strong unity connection between them.
In my opinion, I believe that music transcends the boundaries of nations and tightens the gap of generation. Furthermore, music conveys different various emotions such as love, sorrow, which make people feel a sense of togetherness and understand each other.
To conclude, music is a unique way to unite and connect people from different cultures and ages together.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...stivals, and even funeral. For instance, ancient Greeks educated their children, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, while, for instance, kind of, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89513108614 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71221049914 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576779026217 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2658829152 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.538461538 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275471467108 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10237521252 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773636241125 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180407524794 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729860051975 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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