Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Music has always played a significant role in people's lives. It is often claimed that it is a useful way of bringing people from different cultural backgrounds and age groups closer. In my opinion, this statement is absolutely true.
To begin with, it is inevitably agreed that feelings awaken from melodies are universal. Regardless of cultural features or ethnicity of people, they feel similar emotions. For example, in one of the recent Eurovision contests, the band from France captivated many people's attention and warmed their hearts, even though most of the audience did not know French. Because of this, many of them voted higher points for that French contestant. In other words, since it can affect many people's hearts and evokes almost identical emotions, it brings many nations together.
Not only does music help people from different cultures get closer, but also, it encourages the bonding between the young and the elderly. Joyful and lively musical genres drive many people, from 7 to 70 years old, to dance. To illustrate, in many carnivals across the board, they play pop songs which are desired by all age groups and, therefore, they dance altogether throughout the festival. Similarly, a special kind of music, the classical, is everlasting and, thus, can reach to a larger group of people. Great composers and pianists are admired by millions for centuries. For instance, in any of Beethoven recitals, it is not surprising to see both young and elderly people together, enjoying the show. As it is clearly seen from these aspects, it is one of the vital ways to help people from different ages socialize and unite.
To conclude, from my point of view, music is definitely one of the best methods to help people from distinctive cultures and age groups get together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, kind of, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06060606061 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59236520057 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612794612795 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.639155982 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9375 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265569505841 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876777380081 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651435654524 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187718902084 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688261568879 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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