Music is the form of art, it reflect the emotion and try to express their fellings, people believe that the best way to connect them together is by music because people can understand what the music wanted to tell, they enjoy the melody without understanding the meaning of songs and every age groups can enjoy it. I am fully agree with this statment because even people have different language but still they enjoy to listen music of overseas.
First and foremost, every countries citizen have their own language and their own culture. They make songs regarding their own culture but people living in oberseas wanted to listen their songs because music express the fellings, situation even people do not understand the meaning of that songs but also they will enjoy the music only by its melody, people can fell the songs, they try to figure out what the songs want to express. For example, famous music which are produced by well know singer like selena, have been famous in all over the country and one of her lyrics is also written in Nepal's school book. In this form music can attach people of different culture.
Similarly, every age groups like musics, they can listen music by sitting together. For instance, in this advance generation youngesters still want to listen old songs they really enjoy music to listen old songs they really enjoy music of their grandparents generation. they can still listen music together. By the help of music, grandparents can spend more time with their children. People really get satisfied if they listen music together with their loved once.
In conclusion, even people do not get the meaning of songs, but still they enjoy by listening melody of the music and every age group can listen same kinf of music, which make them more satisfy bt listening together.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reflects'?
Suggestion: reflects
Music is the form of art, it reflect the emotion and try to express their fe...
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Line 1, column 327, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...ery age groups can enjoy it. I am fully agree with this statment because even people ...
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Line 1, column 411, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy listening'.
Suggestion: enjoy listening
... have different language but still they enjoy to listen music of overseas. First and foremost...
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Line 1, column 445, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... they enjoy to listen music of overseas. First and foremost, every countries citi...
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Line 2, column 27, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...f overseas. First and foremost, every countries citizen have their own language and the...
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Line 2, column 220, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...en their songs because music express the fellings, situation even people do not u...
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Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...music of their grandparents generation. they can still listen music together. By the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, regarding, similarly, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87337662338 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24217638696 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441558441558 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.129007694 49.4020404114 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.454545455 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227878992129 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116148570838 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665724855119 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169064944169 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578869256838 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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