Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different ages and culture together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Although one of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that music is a uniformed way to bridge the population of different age groups and cultures together. This essay will highlight why it plays an imperative role to bind them together and also discuss the fact about those who have their own preferences in terms of music.
Most preponderant reason that I believe music is not a particularly a good unifier is in terms of generation gap, this is to say that masses, specifically older generation tends to follow their own liking for music symphonies. For them classic melodies are not only harmonious but also meaningful as compared to the current music genres. The rap music for example, lyrics and rhythm that it follows is irrelevant to most of the older people because of the abusive language and the meaning that it reflects; it escalates more aggression and blues. Hence, difference between the choices of music is reflected between the generations due to the taste and music.
However music plays a pivotal role to create a connection among the people across the world regardless of their ages or the culture that they follow. Good music acts as a stress buster and mood elevator and people follow even if they understand the lyrics of the music or not, they just sway with the sound and the feeling that it creates. A good example is the song 'Dispasito', despite being a Spanish song it creates oneness among all and everyone enjoys it equally whether it is a dance party or a Dj night this song is always played. Therefore, this universal feeling of love music seemed to be enjoyed by all.
To conclude, music is a language of souls, which needs to be understood and felt, although people may have their own choices and preferences, still it uniforms the generations and cultures together.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84735202492 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62378172663 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535825545171 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.8934768415 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.454545455 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1818181818 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237349343832 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924373042181 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544888425141 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144002587597 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251358605061 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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