Some people say that no one should do the same job forever, while others believe that doing the same job is beneficial for the individual, company,and society.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the competitive era, everyone run after the self-growth to gain luxurious life. Some people thinks it can be achieved through dynamic jobs whereas, a static job, an individual do will benefits many, such as himself, firms, and our community at larger extent. In my opinion, i will do a specific job which ensure everybody growth.
This paragraph will throw light on, why one prefer to do same job. expertise and accurancy of a specific job are gained by an employee which in turns contribute to the growth of company's profit and development of our society,where we lives. To elaborate, doing same job will enhance one's speed, knowledge, expertise, capabilities which boost up his/her self-Actualization and company gets its sophisticated asset to reap prolific result and mark strong position by capturing maximum part of market.Furthermore,
government gain more fund from such enterprises and ultimately, that will returns to us through development of our society.
On other side,many persume that to stick forever with specific job makes one bored. In addition, there will be no creativity, enthusiasum, confidence level also goes down with time. Hence, they prefer to do dynamic jobs lifetime and enjoy variety of taste and makes oneself, "Jack of all, Master of none."
As per my perception, I would like to do same job which provide me a platform to became a sophisticated person, and to build a strong personality in the world by helping others who directly or indirectly connected with me i.e my family, field/company where i alot my time, and at last a society from where i belongs to.
To sum up, to do same job or to do differ job depends on one's own decision as per their nature and character. my choice goes with professionalism which reap out many fruits to distribute to the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...munity at larger extent. In my opinion, i will do a specific job which ensure eve...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Suggestion: Expertise
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Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'live'
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Message: The pronoun 'i' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'belong'
Suggestion: belong
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, thus, whereas, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04304635762 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0810453139 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629139072848 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.655551302 49.4020404114 262% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 138.454545455 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4545454545 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270126367497 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112160508034 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082694255747 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135543378925 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635105221547 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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