Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel and work in a foreign country Others say that these are not the only reason why someone should learn a foreign language Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel and work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reason why someone should learn a foreign language.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In modern life, there are very country has national language. Some people believe that the significant reason of learning new language is finding job or vacation in abroad, whereas, others claim that a person become bilingual not only for these reasons. I think, anyone has own purpose to learn a foreign language and work and travel not unique reasons for it.
It is proved by scientist that when an individual is aware of two or many language, his brain’s left and right hemispheres work together. When the brain operates in such as status, person can solve understand the concept of such as film or interview faster than monolingual ones. Next, there is an opportunity for multilingual people exploring other cultures. Language is naturally linked with culture. So, while someone learns another language, he can enhance his outlook and psychical attitude.
Indeed, most people learn new languages in order to increase their work career. People want to acquire big salaries and make corer ladder. Also, while a person travels, he or she should know communicate in the local languagelanguage. On the other hand, there is a great number of pupils who try study abroad. Furthermore, knowing foreign language can increase you respect and support toward you. In my country, for example, an employee can be gotten additional revenue by knowing English. In that case, the authority includes a special bonus to his or her salary. So, bilingual people can earn more money rather than his or her colleagues.
To sum up, personally, although most people learn new language due to work or destination search, bilingual people can study abroad or increase personal status in society.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 70, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun language seems to be countable; consider using: 'many languages'.
Suggestion: many languages
...t when an individual is aware of two or many language, his brain’s left and right hemispheres...
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Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: KNOW_NOW[5]
Message: Did you mean 'now'?
Suggestion: now
...hile a person travels, he or she should know communicate in the local languagelangua...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, whereas, while, for example, i think, such as, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13138686131 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67942872093 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638686131387 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3280938 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7058823529 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1176470588 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289977398999 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837789645462 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0975915701157 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187873509386 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12806194098 0.056905535591 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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