some people say that in our modern age if is unnecessary to teach childern about the skill of handwritting. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is undeniable that the technology is growing uncontrolled in competitive world and new generation rely on advance items such as mobile phone ,lapto and so on.They are ignoring to handwriting skills. I disagree with this statement that handwriting is not beneficial for juveniles.
There are manifold points to endorse up to the skill of handwriting is more worthwhile for children .First and foremost ,children start to learn writing from their school time and they can easily learn to writing task so handwriting boost up their confidence .It is a good way to preserve gold moments by songwriting write anything then that writing topic live memorize for long time as it acts a powerful memory. Quoting an example from my personal life that when i was passed in 5th class that time | Wrote a poem in English languages.The tittle of this poem was little star and it was large near about 250 words which I remember till today. It is only possible by handwriting skills.
Further ,sometimes , this skill helps the student to select their future career as a number of writing completion organize on not student get national and international level .The student get reward or prize by using clear and neat handwriting which is beneficial to join their future goal.
More over , there is no doubt that this skill plays a cardinal role in our life however it consumes a lot of time and energy . Student should go with advance technology which is helpful to improve their living standard Juvenile can do their study on laptop, computer and other electronic gadgets. They can write all things by using advance technology.One culd draw the conclusion based on above discussion that handwriting skills has a plenty of advantage as compared to modern life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, then, while, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98976109215 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72560534307 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61433447099 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.704806763 49.4020404114 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 162.444444444 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5555555556 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0567509614835 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0262759906552 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0213543747786 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0346600674559 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247875084671 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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