Some people say that in our modern age it is unnecessary to teach children about the skill of handwriting To what extent do you agree or disagree

Some people believe that in our contemporary society, teaching the skill of handwriting to our children is not vital. Today, by the advent of high-tech devices like computers and it's prevalence among students, lots of homework can be done by typing instead of writing on the paper. In my opinion, although computer has contributed the children's education, it is still necessary to teach them the skill of handwriting.
This is because the skill of handwriting can help children to improve their concentration also sculpt their mind to think more creative. In addition, handwriting can be an effective part of some careers. In this essay I will discuss about the importance of teaching handwriting to kids.

I assume that teaching handwriting is still necessary for our children, because the benefits of learning a new skill always overweight its disadvantages. The skill of handwriting can help children to think and write with more attention for avoiding make a mistake. While correcting a mistake on the paper is not as easy as editing it at your device by typing. Additionally, handwriting can be effective means of showing people creation and emotions. So the importance of learning it can not be ignored.
Learning a new skill like handwriting can be valuable in the development of fine motor skills, practicing for writing can contribute to students' artistic developments. Besides, there are some of careers like Calligraphy which still require effective handwriting.

In the end, I reckon children's abilities might improved in different ways by learning handwriting as a skill. It has some benefits not only for physical and mental power also for having connection and communicating with other people. In addition to this, children can be well-prepared for their society and their level of confidence will increase if they know about all the skills that other people have had it before.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 266, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... attention for avoiding make a mistake. While correcting a mistake on the paper is no...
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Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the careers') or simply say ''some careers''.
Suggestion: some of the careers; some careers
...tistic developments. Besides, there are some of careers like Calligraphy which still require ef...
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Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to handwrite'.
Suggestion: to handwrite
... improved in different ways by learning handwriting as a skill. It has some benefits not on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, still, well, while, i reckon, in addition, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21568627451 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01546698507 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52614379085 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3384696293 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.75 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234762953757 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922390405552 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832613301689 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147466559024 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490421639361 0.056905535591 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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