Some people say that parents should control children's behavior from young age.What you think about it?
Few person feel that childern's nature must be control by the guardians at young stage.I feel that it is the responsibility of parents to take care of their child manners.I will give my thoughts in upcoming paragraphs.
There are various aspects from which it is clear that it is the responsibility of parents for child's nature.Firstly, parents must provide good environment to the children.They behave with the child's as friends.So, children can also share their problems with them.Or can live in a comfortable environment.Secondly, the schooling of the kids must be good in which they can learn discipline rules to live.For example, if they study in a reputative school.So, they can learn moral values easily.Also, aware about the responsibilities.
Moreover,parents also must take care of company in which their child is living or studying.Also, parents taught child to give respect to elders.Apart from this, give them atmosphere with freedom.There must be no burden on them regarding study and anything.There must be chance for the children to ask their queries and share their problems with parents.
Overall,it is clear that good nature of a child is depend upon parents.So, i think that parents must be friendly with the children from mature stage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, apart from, for example, i feel, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 201.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29353233831 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35021344107 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547263681592 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.671719973 49.4020404114 295% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 266.0 106.682146367 249% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.25 20.7667163134 242% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.25 7.06120827912 386% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112763332353 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819735044065 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291016797977 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819735044065 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291016797977 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.6 13.0946893788 218% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 29.19 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.3001002004 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.29 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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