it is believed by some one individual s that guardian s should mativate their children to spent liberated time by participating in group activities. while, other people said its significant for offspring how to played out with own way. this essay i will intend to analyse both the view along with my perspective.
on the one hand, there are numerous benefits for children to taking a part in organized group activites. The prominent one is the devlopment of social skills with other kids. In other words, when a kids spent liberated time with joining group activities and this group programme teach offspring how to live in harmany and child share joy and sorrow with each others in a certain situations. For example, a servey was conducted by the uk university in 2016 they found that around 58% boys and girls who participated in group activities in free time that more active than other kids. This evidence proves that group activites has more constructive effect.
on the other hand, there are some drawback children who spent free time with own ways. To explicate it, most of the child waste their time to playing video games and operating mobile phones. Moreover, playing video games and operating cell phones by offspring it bad influence their study and relations. Hence it is quite clear that brood who spent their liberated time with own way that not good for her life
In conclusion, although taking a part in group activities has multifarious benifit for brood than the spent free time with in your style
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81467181467 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4917627896 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525096525097 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 259.0 20.2975951904 1276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1247.0 106.682146367 1169% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 259.0 20.7667163134 1247% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 93.0 7.06120827912 1317% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322169947306 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.322169947306 0.084324248473 382% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208137896556 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329177158172 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 130.7 13.0946893788 998% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -182.95 50.2224549098 -364% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 103.1 11.3001002004 912% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.1 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.47 8.58950901804 227% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 9.78957915832 613% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 105.6 10.1190380762 1044% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 60.0 10.7795591182 557% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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