Some people say that playing computer games is bad for children in every way Others say that playing computer games can have positive effects on the way children develop

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...ames and watching reality shows can help children to develop cognitive skills , w...
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...p children to develop cognitive skills , while others argue that playing video g...
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...thers argue that playing video games and watching Television shows does not help ...
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... to improve cognitive skills. In my view , playing video games have positive imp...
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...o improve cognitive skills. In my view , playing video games have positive impact...
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... on children’s mind. To commence with , there are various advantages to play vi...
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... advantages to play video games. Firstly,Playing video games require using logical thi...
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...o games require using logical thinking , therefore it help children to develop p...
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...e using logical thinking , therefore it help children to develop problem slowing s...
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...help children to develop problem slowing skill. As a consequences,they may improv...
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... to develop problem slowing skill. As a consequences,they may improve their academic skills....
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...oblem slowing skill. As a consequences,they may improve their academic skills. Seco...
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...demic skills. Secondly, playing games or watching Television shows works as a str...
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...ever as well as it gives them felling of pleasure. As a result , they are less li...
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... them felling of pleasure. As a result , they are less likely to suffer from men...
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...om mental health issues such as anxiety, panic attacks, mental disorders and so o...
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...s, mental disorders and so on. In the Uk , For example, majority of students play ...
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..., For example, majority of students play video games to avoid mental illness. F...
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...s to avoid mental illness. Furthermore , it is fact in this cutting-edge era , p...
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...re , it is fact in this cutting-edge era , people will be able to earn money by us...
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...ople will be able to earn money by using their gaming skills. Due to esport,peopl...
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...ing their gaming skills. Due to esport,people can play different type of games and re...
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...ferent type of games and represent their nation as well as they will be also go...
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...ell as they will be also gonna be famous . To exemplify , famous esport player nin...
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...l be also gonna be famous . To exemplify , famous esport player ninja won world ...
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...nja won world forth-night championship ,and hence he won many trophies , money a...
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...pionship ,and hence he won many trophies , money and 10 million plus Instagram f...
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...d 10 million plus Instagram followers.In addition to this, playing battle ground...
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...involved players to play game in team.Thus ,playing games teach the value of teamw...
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...lved players to play game in team.Thus ,playing games teach the value of teamwor...
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...laying games teach the value of teamwork . To sum up , playing video or watchin...
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...ach the value of teamwork . To sum up , playing video or watching web shows not...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, in my view, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41245136187 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77888619861 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618677042802 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.737978747 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.916666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.75 7.06120827912 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332546135536 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125915630047 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901706458788 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111744119721 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107989052495 0.056905535591 190% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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