Some people say that school studies are not useful and most important things are learnt outside the school. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and examples.
It is universally acknowledged that there is no alternative way of education to become well-adjusted human being in this planet & school is considered the first place from where a child start in acquiring his first knowledge. However, it is unfortunate that a question has raised about the significance of school education system. Some of the masses contend that there is no need of schooling because most of the important things can be learnt from other ways whereas I am not supporting this notion for some obvious reasons.
To begin with, school is no longer only the place of gaining knowledge, actually it has become the platform of educating the children about the social and moral activities which are essential for their further career. Under the guidance of teachers, students become the productive members of the society. For example, a good understanding on moral education provided by teachers assist them to become kind for every member in the society. Secondly, most of the class works are inspired to do in a group which increases the power of communication among the students. They learn how to speak with people, how to deal with new problem and after all how to become a good human being.
Apart the importance of schooling discussed above, school plays an important role for developing the inter-personal skills of an individual. For instance, in Bangladesh, schools are seemed to arrange cultural programs, sports activities, inter-school competition (dancing, singing, debating) and so on which are really important for the physical development of the students.
On the other hand, there are some materialistic peoples who believe the real world exist outside the school. They think, only getting trained about some specific jobs is enough for dealing with all problems. For example, if anyone wants to become the car mechanic, he will go to the training center and become the mechanic. This type of people also add that, attending such kinds of cultural activities organized in school is just a waste of time where I am totally disagreed.
To conclude, after all the arguments and discussions, I would like to say that every children must send to the school to become a good human being because teachers are the second guardians who can make them prepared for their future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 332, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...ignificance of school education system. Some of the masses contend that there is no need of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, after all, for example, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09788359788 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78581240585 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558201058201 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.4466282234 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.466666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0666666667 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201685172139 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709541315047 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06503863248 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113964156881 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518118566588 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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