Some people Say that self-employment is better than a job in a company or in a institutions which one is better?
In the era of inflation employment plays a crucial role in the life of the people because without employment people cannot survive better life in the society. So, a group of people reckon that self employment is better while other contradicts this view by saying that job is best for the masses. So, this essay shall analyse both the aspects along with my opinion in the upcoming paragraph.
To begin with, there are many views which describes that self recruited is better for the people. Firstly, some of the people have an interest into self employment because they feel safe in the self-hired. So people can choose their own domain where they have more experience. Not only this, with this domain they get more liberty and no one can monitoring them and give the orders. Further, the persons who are doing the self-profession they did not afraid by the loss the job so when they do better so they get more profit in their work.
Flipping to the other side, job is best than self-employment. The prime one is that, people get fixed salary in their job because it is not matter whether company performs well or not but they get monthly salary. Furthermore, the multitudes who are doing the jobs they get more amenities like as free medical facilities and housing as well. Moreover, when they retired from their work so they also benefited by the monthly pension. Also, teaching programmes are including in the jobs so they should sharp their skills as well as while going outside by their companies they are interacting with other people and when they do very well so employer get promotion in their work.
In my opinion, employment is the important for the luxurious lifestyle. So when people want to decide their own job before doing any work, they should develop their skills by working in a company then people are understanding any kind of situation as well as they can earn capital amount of money and people generate new connection with the new people after they start their own profession.
Overall, after a lots of thoughts and deliberation it is true to say that both domain are equally well according to their need. So people can learn more skills while doing any type of job whether it is self-employment or job in a company.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, kind of, as well as, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51204926376 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479591836735 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0378586747 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.529411765 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0588235294 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11764705882 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280823591871 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107555170738 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816563868675 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17759190519 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584771954104 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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