There are differing views amongst people in regards to sports. There are individuals who believe that it is a crucial aspect of society, while others perceive it merely as a means to pass their time. The narrative ahead will explain reasons for both viewpoints before reaching to a reasonable conclusion.
There is a group of people with the belief that sports are integral part of people's lifestyle. They state so because sports are necessary for physical fitness. In modern times humans are equipped with all kinds of facilities and are busy with earning money. So they majorly stay inactive either at home or seat, idle at one place in the offices. By indulging in sports they can gain some activeness and muscle strength. This in turn can give them a healthy life without any deceases.
However, there are individuals who opine that sports are only meant to have fun. The prime reason for their belief is based on over the popularity of the same. Because people are over indulging in sports they are not giving enough time to their responsibilities. Time which they can use to make their career or money they carelessly spend it on these games, creating imbalance in their life. Cricket, for example, in India most teenagers spend an increasing amount of time playing it, ultimately it result in poorer grades in academics.
To conclude, it is obvious from the above discussion that both groups have justifiable reasons for their standpoints. Nevertheless, I concur that if sports are played in moderation they are the most invention created by humans.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...here are differing views amongst people in regards to sports. There are individuals who belie...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sed on over the popularity of the same. Because people are over indulging in sports the...
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Message: Did you mean 'results'?
Suggestion: results
...mount of time playing it, ultimately it result in poorer grades in academics. To co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97709923664 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62603186464 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610687022901 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1268656024 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.5 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0625 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13576120219 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479861957486 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393471517548 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837815281918 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0121379333907 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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