Some people say that sports play an important role in society. Others, however, think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Sport is one of the most enjoyable activities in the world. Sports bring out happiness from small children' s to the old age. Sport play an important role in society, although many people considered sport as a leisure activities. I consider it as the major activities for good and healthy life.
Firstly, sport plays the vital role in maintaining a good and healthy life of peoples. Sport brings out happiness and joy in everyone playing it. Sport brings all the members in the society together. For example when an event is organized in the society all the members come over there and enjoy the game and be together which brings the joy in the persons life. Sport helps to make relation between the society. It also brings awareness between community.
On the other hand, Sport makes people connect with each others. Sport help people to attach with each other it brings out the competition between each other and helps to make the relation. For examples society organized the tournament of any sports then many other society will also be motivated to join the game and enjoy which will automatically bring out the strong bond between the society. Competition helps to make the skills get sharper and develops technique.
In conclusion, sport is the very essential need for all the age group, it brings out strong bond between people also helps in maintaining good health, sport is very essential thing for the development of society with various of games. Therefore, sport plays the great role an important role in society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'plays'.
Suggestion: plays
... small children s to the old age. Sport play an important role in society, although ...
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Line 1, column 218, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'activity'?
Suggestion: activity
...ny people considered sport as a leisure activities. I consider it as the major activities ...
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Line 3, column 350, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...be together which brings the joy in the persons life. Sport helps to make relation betw...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ls get sharper and develops technique. In conclusion, sport is the very essenti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92277992278 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47461734653 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459459459459 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.120267061 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6875 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179757900172 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823218995792 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948463262796 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13704693665 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485455745002 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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