Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
This is 21st century, many new inventions has brought today world to new era. The invention of new medicine for curing diseases to save mankind. Thus, with the new invention also current peoples trend is changing towards past. Today various alternative forms of medicine is been used although people are educated they still follow or try to copy others. Hence, due to this reason these alternatives medicine is not curing various o diseases and the patient health is worst day by day. I believe this types of alternative medicine should not be used.
Firstly, alternatives medicine is not curing the person. it looks like the medicine is working but in fact it's not. Many people invest huge money in these medicine but in result nothing is back nor health or money. Foe example if i have a headache then doing massage in head will not make my pain go. In fact using the medicine given by the doctor will work because they have study about it and scientist have done research about it. Therefore it works because its prescribed by the authorized person after a study about the problems.
Secondly, In first people think the alternatives is working but slowly it will leave and the problems will go even worst. Thus, as a result we should again go to the hospital for a doctor. But it's too late because the period in which medicine will work has already gone. For example many people go to have a body therapy if they have pain in body but actually or any part in the body. But in fact if there is problem inside the body then we need to go to doctor for proper treatment. The alternative will not work in the same way if medicine is not given in a proper time then it will also not work.
To sum up, I also believe this alternatives medicine are not good for human because the problem is something and the solution is not proper it will never work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...iseases to save mankind. Thus, with the new invention also current peoples trend is changing ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'alternatives'' or 'alternative's'?
Suggestion: alternatives'; alternative's
...others. Hence, due to this reason these alternatives medicine is not curing various o diseas...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the worst'.
Suggestion: is the worst
...rious o diseases and the patient health is worst day by day. I believe this types of alt...
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Suggestion: It
...ives medicine is not curing the person. it looks like the medicine is working but ...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ike the medicine is working but in fact its not. Many people invest huge money in t...
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Message: Did you mean 'this medicine' or 'these medicines'?
Suggestion: this medicine; these medicines
...s not. Many people invest huge money in these medicine but in result nothing is back nor healt...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... scientist have done research about it. Therefore it works because its prescribed by the ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'alternatives'' or 'alternative's'?
Suggestion: alternatives'; alternative's
...work. To sum up, I also believe this alternatives medicine are not good for human because...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, thus, for example, in fact, as a result, to sum up, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52678571429 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.333741385 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482142857143 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4880302414 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.0526315789 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6842105263 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78947368421 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107540010629 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038934392481 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403846146361 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0701049026031 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510694830956 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.