Some people say that teaching local history to school children is more important than teaching world history to them. Do you agree or disagree?
Learning about local or world history has different perspectives. In my perspective, local history is better for children than learning about world history.
Children can get interests and motivation to learn and study by learning about local history. By acknowledging the historical events around them, children can physically feel the connection between themselves and historical events. For example, when they learnt that their grandfather had fought for the city and which events are written in local areas, it can boost children towards to learning about local histories.
In contrast, world history is difficult to understand for majority of children. Since world history has many historical events, which occurred sequentially or concurrently, it can create confusion and difficulties for children. For example, World War ii initiated by German Nazis and at the same time, there was Japanese war in Asia. These two events are independent to each other and children may found difficulties to understand those events separately which can results in discouragement in studying in history.
Local history, therefore, is better than world history, because it can initiate children’s interest towards to study. It is important to draw children’s attention to study and history subjects before learning. Once children are interested, motivated and having full attentions towards to history, they can study for world history later on.
In conclusion, local history can be used as the trigger to study for world history. Since many children are more interested in their local events than worlds, the local history is better to learn than world history.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 466, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'result'
Suggestion: result
...stand those events separately which can results in discouragement in studying in histor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59448818898 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93590203158 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492125984252 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4433292996 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247431214214 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124856190609 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723767243051 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184872659222 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700188567349 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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