Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to. How true is this statement? what can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environment.
Traveling is a necessary demand nowadays. After a long time with business, people want to relax and try something new. But, the dark side of tourism is pessimist effects on the countries that tourists travel to. Is that true or false?
That is true. There are many reasons to demonstrate why. Firstly, thousands and millions of strange people come to a country, it leads to increase trash and emissions up to thousand and million times. Secondly, the attendance of tourists to local festivals/events make a big bad change from tradition, it affects negatively to local cultures.
To solve these problems, we need to limit the number of travelers and give a high purchase if one of them does something illegal.
Overall, tourism has many drawbacks but also get a lot of benefits. The most important thing is is finding some good ways to reduce harmful effects and develop the strong points of tourism.
- Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to. How true is this statement? what can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environment. 27
- Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to. How true is this statement? what can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environment. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 751.0 1615.20841683 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 153.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90849673203 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72651663247 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.705882352941 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 506.74238477 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7663848635 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.2727272727 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9090909091 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333449019896 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10190316038 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785941335696 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157632648178 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916131563922 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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