Nowadays, the development of transportations makes tourism be easy for everybody. Travel is a way to relax on a vacation. They are attracted to explore new places and try to find something difference from the places where they stay.
People who travel many times can experience another culture. They can directly see beautiful views and feel it. This makes them know about how beautiful of it. For example, they will climb a mountain to have fresh air or nice views on high. Moreover, people go to villages or tribes to learn more about other's culture or traditional meals. Locals will teach them how to love nature and live close it.
However, somebody who busies with their life does not have time to travel, but they can still open their knowledge of new culture with those media. Today, there are a lot of ways to get different cultures, such as the internet, radio and television. People who went to one place shared information about their experience on social. Those help them appreciate each other's culture.
In my opinion, there are the different experience with people who travel around the world or just stay at home. On the other hand, I believe that they will have the same feeling about other culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rence from the places where they stay. People who travel many times can experie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, still, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 210.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89047619048 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5459273422 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62380952381 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.979686372 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.4666666667 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258886782327 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835533502212 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643003715865 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157299777156 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649630337436 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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