Some people say that when deciding taxes, government should prioritize health care. Others think that there are more important priorities for tax-payers’ money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
When it comes to deciding how tax revenue should be allocated, the debate often centers around whether the government should prioritize healthcare or focus on other pressing needs. Although there can be valid arguments for prioritizing other sectors, I firmly believe that healthcare is of utmost importance.
On the one hand, some argue that there are competing priorities for taxpayers' money that may take precedence over healthcare. One commonly cited consideration is ensuring national security and defense, which may require substantial financial resources. This includes funding for military operations, intelligence agencies, and emergency response systems to protect citizens from external threats and maintain stability. Another argument is that the authorities should invest in initiatives to stimulate economic growth, such as tax breaks for businesses or subsidies for industries, since these measures aim to create jobs, boost consumer spending, and drive economic activity.
In my view, despite the importance of these aspects, healthcare should be a top consideration for government investment for several reasons. Chief among these is that ensuring access to quality healthcare is not just a matter of economic or strategic interest; it is a moral imperative. Every individual deserves the opportunity to lead a healthy and fulfilling life, meaning that healthcare is essential for realizing this fundamental right. Secondly, investing in healthcare yields long-term benefits for society, including improved public health outcomes, increased productivity, and reduced healthcare costs over time. By addressing health issues proactively, governments can mitigate the economic and social consequences of preventable diseases and illnesses.
In conclusion, while there are competing priorities for taxpayer money, healthcare should be a top consideration for government investment due to its significant impact on public health, economic prosperity, and social equity. By prioritizing healthcare, governments can fulfill their responsibility to protect and promote the well-being of their citizens and create a healthier, more prosperous society for all.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 6.06818181818 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14205709201 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633116883117 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4999807884 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.769230769 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227306414219 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788762987794 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618629154902 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145471099056 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402415888263 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.75 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.22 12.4159519038 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.83 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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