Some people says that self employment is better than working for a company or institution. Discuss both points of view. What is your opinion?
It says that " The true charity is not giving bread or money, but providing employment". With the steady growth in industrialization, the lifestyle of people have been greatly effected. They have achieved various milestones. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irrevocable and as complex as even. For instance, the given topic asserts that which job is best; the entrepreneur or job in any company or institution? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic through examples and assertions and shape up opinion by the end.
On one side, there is a group of people who believe that the self employment is better. They strengthen their view point by claiming that the people who is entrepreneur they are earn more as compare to job in any company. Moving forward, the person who start their own business the name or fame are also high. They famous in the society regard their work. The standard of living have been also high because if they have more money then they make their standard high. As a result, after their fulfillment of basic needs they come true their desires. A good illustration of this the suvey conduct by Hindustan times the entrepreneurs are earn more money as compare to that people who work in under any company.
Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of people who beleive that the job for company is good. To make their argument convening they claim that panctuality and despline in under the work in company. Apart from this, how to go job in proper time and also care about all rules this can people only learn in company. The all entrepreneurs firstly do the so many jobs and then create their own business becase if they follow the rules and regulations self than they can teach their team. The perfect example of this the mark zackerburger before find or create the Facebook app dod the so many jobs in the past and so on famous entrepreneurs are done the many different kind of jobs.
Nevertheless, weighing both use option, i beleive that there is no single conclusion. Still, i take this ground that an effective clap require both use of hands. According to my opinion to become a good entrepreneur for learning despline and pantuality to do the jobs. Its depend on people's will.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'earned'.
Suggestion: earned
...the people who is entrepreneur they are earn more as compare to job in any company. ...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... who is entrepreneur they are earn more as compare to job in any company. Moving f...
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Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...so high because if they have more money then they make their standard high. As a res...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'earned'.
Suggestion: earned
...y Hindustan times the entrepreneurs are earn more money as compare to that people wh...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...so on famous entrepreneurs are done the many different kind of jobs. Nevertheless, weighing...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...t there is no single conclusion. Still, i take this ground that an effective clap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, apart from, for instance, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79336734694 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67210468167 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510204081633 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.042385317 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4090909091 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162179803759 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494928880169 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434929341764 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961787916362 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127213076422 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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