Some people think that all teenagers should be required to unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole.
Do you agree or disagree?
It has been widely assumed that all students should be forced to do volunteer works in their spare time to help the local residents. Also, many believe that this would be beneficial for both sides. However, my idea is contrary to those ridiculous arguments.
My opinion invariably emanates from the fact that it is obvious that the pressure of the study account for a great deal of how teenagers spend their spare time. They are usually required to be attended at lectures and complete a colossal workload of assignments. If they were forced to do unpaid jobs, they would be prone to encounter stress and depression. When young people do have some leisure time, we should encourage them to enjoy it with their friends or to spend it doing sports and other leisure activities. They have many years of work ahead of them when they finish their studies.
As for the public good, I don't believe society has anything to gain from forcing young people to do unpaid work. In fact, it apparently goes against the idea of a constitution and human rights when a group of people is required to do volunteer work, especially that it may be against their will. Doing this can lead young people to feel that they are being taken advantage of, so they will not be able to work effectively.
I acknowledge with the argument that they learn the sense of cooperation and sharing with others in society if they work on a voluntary basis, but this practical knowledge can also be easily gained in Group work assignments at school when young people work together and discuss how to solve problems that are required.
Subsequently weighing all the mentioned, it can now be safely stated that teenagers may choose to work for free and help others, but in my opinion, we should not make this compulsory.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Subsequently,
...w to solve problems that are required. Subsequently weighing all the mentioned, it can now ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, may, so, as for, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72435897436 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49387810606 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3006421381 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.384615385 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397658924279 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139670198651 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582216303846 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219308076895 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483558632706 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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