Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help losal community.they believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and the society as a whole.do you agree or disagree
Socially active young adults are a perfect sign of a dynamic and intense community. However, I do not suggest a compulsory gratuitous work by them since it is a choice of personal interest.
Supporters of this concept argue that, this young volunteers with full of energy and spirit should be guided in a way that should benefit both the individual and community. They enlist a lot of advantages like good communication skills, high level of connectivity with the community, increases self confidence, provides a sense of purpose, fun and fulfillment to life . Good number of participants in the Junior red cross society is pointed out as an excellent example. But I strongly believe that compassion and positivity is required for any patriotic deed not the pressurization.
Furthermore, these school or collage going adolescents may not be getting enough time for charity works,because they are already under pressure of their increasing load of studies. Moreover, a proper relaxation time is essential for their physical and mental growth and hence a better performance in academics as well as personal life. Forcing them may deteriorate their studies and consequently their future. If these future immature adults gets discouraged by unprofited work, they may carry the tendency even in their adult life. Some pupils participate in charity works for particular scholarships and course admissions which again spoils the ultimate goal of social responsibility. From the above points it is clear that compelling the youth may not end up with good results.
In conclusion, social works by young adults are to be encouraged, but not to be forced since pressurizing may lead to potential dangers than the possible benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3102189781 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04223927966 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649635036496 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9558998122 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.923076923 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193740199778 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592873165217 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430539662556 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102328352185 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03701858469 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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