Some people think that all university students should study whatever thay like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technolody.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
it is argued that students should only study permitted subject such as science and technology as the applicable and useful of them in the future. while I have admit that this perspective is accurate to a somewhat extent. I still hold a notion that all university students should be encouraged pursuing whatever subjects they keen on.
On the one hand, the development of global economic make many people think that students should only study several subjects which have benefits in the future like science or technology. First of all, the world in 4.0 revolution, science and technology are important basis for all countries. developed countries make an effort to develop and improve their science and technology while developing countries want to attract that investments from rich countries. this is to say, this creates myriad golden opportunities for students so that they can have jobs with high salary. At the same time, the unemployment status is more and more popular therefore, youngsters tend to choose trend subjects which they feel necessary in the future.
On the other hand, others in favour of all students have rights to study whatever subjects have their own justification. As a matter of fact, people have freedom of choice their education, when student go to university with passion and enthusiasm the effect of studying is higher than they only study compulsory subjects. Without the pressure of learning students can raise their creative and reach achievement easily. students can combine their favour subjects and trend subjects, which bring for them many benefits such as: mutil-skills, deep professional, wide knowledge. this even make more opportunities for them moreover, any kind of subjects are useful.
To recapitulate, I am strongly convinced that despite the several benefits of studying useful subjects, students ought to pursue their passion. Stimutaneously, it would be more prudent for them to incorporate both opinion in order to attain their best results.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, while, kind of, such as, as a matter of fact, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37341772152 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81499037404 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54746835443 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5727736088 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.2 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311172022902 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108179733166 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09785188437 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206472658693 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922415296449 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.