Some people think that that all University students should whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subject they will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology discuss both the view and give your opinion.
It has always been a moot point of discussion - which subject student add their curriculum. Some people reckon that University student ought to study whatever they want,however,. Some individuals agree that they have to only be allowed to study subject that will be fruitful in future: Science and Technology.
To embark with ,in this Era competition has been booming owing to that, education level become high, some genius perceive that students should whatever they like by the University. If student gets opportunity to change the subject owing to that - students learn the subject through interest; they can give their best behind the subject they would feel happy. Moreover; they can give best performance if they study whatever they like. The epitome of Japan - in this country has made a rule ,students whatever, subject want to learn, they can learn happily. On account of that student of Japan their magnum opus o different compare to other country.
However ,in contemporary Era Technology has been booming by leaps and bounds ,owing to that, some intelligence reckon that, education should be based on major subject on of practical course rather than student interest. When student learn some practical subject by University, which helpful in future and student knowledgeable about machine; equipment. Moreover, when consider the future competition of job will be high and companies will be considered also practical skills when students learn through Science and Technology. An instance government of USA more focus on science and technology fields and the government provide scholarship, free education ,job on science and practical skills due to that, in the world highest of student got job in Fortune 500 company compare to other Nation.
To recapitulate, many people are against studying only core subject however in future it is essential to study science subject to get handsome salary .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33112582781 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70130015228 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523178807947 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6787281638 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.846153846 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.43954342921 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169127952569 0.084324248473 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950574389403 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269893549888 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978843483613 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.