Nowadays, science is getting developed and plays a significant role in the global industry. With this development, it has created more opportunities for young people. In this essay, I will explain why I support student should study subjects which are related to technology.
Firstly, thanks to up-to-date science inventions, the rise in employment which helps improve life quality and social stability. For example, people who have their own occupations will have fewer crime potentials than unemployed ones. As a result, the decreasing ratio of society's vices will contribute to a thriving economy. Secondly, we can apply the advanced techniques to exchange goods and integrate with the world. For instance, in the past when we want to exchange the import and export of goods, sailing boats will be used instead of planes. It can be easily seen that sailing may be more dangerous and time-consuming while planes are faster and safer.
By contrast, if students have a variety of choices in their study majors, they will have endless inspiration as well as excitement which is much crucial in future successes. It can be seen that following passion would enhance self- discipline and be more effective. They will put more efforts into solves problems rather than complain about their jobs. A prime example is that with the tension and huge workloads such as doctors or nurses if that person does not really love this job, they will run out of energy quickly. This issue will lead to unanticipated consequences for patients.
In summary, I consistently support young people should study subjects that will be useful in the future. Following dreams is not wrong, but it is more essential to make the best choices for yourselves.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: sepidealipour
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in summary, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13074204947 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72586843518 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618374558304 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9497814111 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.75 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248176768725 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748246630158 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801499144454 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156989116641 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388432507934 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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