Choosing subject to learn at university is one of the issues that students who just finished high school have to handle. Some people believe that freshmen should study their favorite subject while some people argue that they need to study subject which they think benefic for their future. In my opinion, I agree with people who think university students should learn what they want.
Some people argue that useful subject should be learn by students who just graduated high school because of wages and opportunities. Firstly, useful branch such as science and technology will bring them a good earnings when they graduating and getting job. For example, nursing which is a effective branch make a good wages. Last but not least, opportunities to get the job when chose available subject.
The others believe that freshmen should learn what they want because when they learn their favorite branch they will have passion and energy to emphasize on learning. Therefore, when they graduating or having job, they can not regret about the time when they spend they can learn whatever they want. They say :“ Your future your choice “.
I think not only students but also everyone need to do, to learn, to dream what they like. Being yourself is a blessing.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: sepidealipour
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 49, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'learned', 'learnt'?
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...ple argue that useful subject should be learn by students who just graduated high sch...
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Line 2, column 210, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'earning'?
Suggestion: earning
...e and technology will bring them a good earnings when they graduating and getting job. F...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ting job. For example, nursing which is a effective branch make a good wages. Las...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ilable subject. The others believe that freshmen should learn what they want bec...
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Message: Unpaired symbol: '”' seems to be missing
...can learn whatever they want. They say :“ Your future your choice “. I think not...
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Suggestion:
... future your choice “. I think not only students but also everyone need to do, t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97156398104 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.261433394 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554502369668 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.8670425074 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4166666667 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397614916833 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141877059017 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855532001544 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236912312553 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053206690991 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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