Some people think that all young people should receive full-time education until 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is widely believed that it is necessary for all people under 18 to remain in full-time education. Personally, I completely agree with this opinion on account of better job prospects and moral development that full-time education brings to them.
The primary reason why I believe that young people should receive full-time education until they reach 18 is that it will open new doors to promising job opportunities in the future. By virtues of creative and interactive learning environment as well as the assistance of well-qualified teachers, students can acquire theoretical knowledge on the main subjects related to their future jobs and hone practical skills through attending extracurricular activities with their friends more effectively. As a result, they will easily find a suitable job with proper credentials and support themselves financially in the future. The example of many corporations in Vietnam requiring employers to finish their full-time education and graduate from high school at the age of 18 speaks volume to the irrefutable benefits of full-time education.
Another important point worth mentioning is that full-time education contributes significantly to students’moral development. The main reason for believing this is that besides academic subjects, schools also equip students with social etiquette which helps to shape their character and attitude towards other people through ethics lessons and extracurricular activities. Therefore, they know how to establish harmonious relationship with other people at their workplace and negotiate disagreements with their colleagues. It is also possible to say that possessing both expertise and professional behaviours at work will help young people gain respect and appreciation from all people around.
In conclusion, I totally agree with the idea that students should receive full-time education until they reach 18 in the sense that it will help them to get an ideal job and receive admiration from other people for moral reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67326732673 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12176331963 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57095709571 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.49697759 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.272727273 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302551560754 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130265590461 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101079913289 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217765123369 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455440495381 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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