Some people think allowing more public transport is the only way to control traffic problems while others say that there are other ways to handle traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Traffic congestion has become a major social problem not only in developed cities but also in all over the world. It is a tough nut to crack for many nations. No doubt encourage people to use public transport is effect method but there are another way which can be used for reducing traffic jam. This essay will describe that and my opinion in subsequent paragraphs.
Traffic congestion has become a major social problem not only in developed cities but also in all over the world. It is a tough nut to crack for many nations. No doubt encourage people to use public transport is effect method but there are another way which can be used for reducing traffic jam. This essay will describe that and my opinion in subsequent paragraphs.
To embark on, there are many reasons why certain multitude believe using public vehicle is the best method to decline traffic congestion. First and foremost is that, if people will use public transport then automatically the use of private vehicles will reduce. As a result, there are myriad benefits like reduction in jam, lack of accidents as well as less pollution which is very harmful for human being and environment. Secondly, government should give 24/7 public transport services to people because there are many benefits of it, which mentioned in first point and these days people don't like to wait for something. So if these facilities will provide to people than they will enthusiastic to use it and also it is cheaper than private vehicles.
On the other hand, undoubtedly, there are other ways to control the traffic congestion. Moreover, government should increase the cost of patrol because many people have their vehicles so they prefer to use own vehicle instead of using public transport. Therefore, when rate of patrol will high then middle or average people cannot afford it then they will prefer to use public vehicle. Consequently, it puts good effect on traffic congestion. Furthermore, government should make strick traffic rules if anyone breaks the rules then government should punish according to law. Government should organise traffic awareness camp through these camps people can learn about traffic rules, what is harmful effects of using too much vehicle and so on. As,it can become beneficial for reducing traffic jam.
As far as I know, both methods are equally important because we want to reduce traffic jam then it is not matter what measurements are very effective.
In epilogue, indeed both ways do work similarly if government should apply these rules strictly. It will be beneficial for people as well as for economy of government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, as for, no doubt, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2195.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 435.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04597701149 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56362143112 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448275862069 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 685.8 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7357466925 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4347826087 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9130434783 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86956521739 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239250066357 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820975563969 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837144421573 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136229217808 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539429824959 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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