With enormous advancements in technology, communication has seen greater heights. While some contend that electronic mailing and social media have adverse effect on personal communications, others argue that it has positive impact on it. Although the internet-based communication has been helpful in keeping in touch with the people overseas, regardless of the geographical proximity, I feel it has some drawbacks too, and I will discuss the same in this essay.
Certainly, modern forms of communication are faster and can connect people irrespective of their locations. Emails like Gmail and Yahoo mail, for example, have been connecting people instantly and are highly useful in case of emergency communications. Similarly, social media has been helping people to know more insights about our friends and families like their achievements, anniversaries and birthdays, which were not possible in the traditional forms of communication, unless the other person remembers it personally. I would argue, however, that wishing via emails and social media have become ubiquitous and hence, do not have any emotional value.
Conventional forms of communication, by contrast, are slower but create stronger bonds. Handwritten letters, for instance, take 2 days to several weeks to reach the recipients, but still the nostalgia that it creates when the reader reads the letter can never be replaced by any forms of the latest communications. It can reminiscence the memories vividly within minimal amount of text. In addition to this, the effort and the time that the sender puts in making the letter more personal and attractive would be clearly evident. This has certainly made the traditional forms of communication more special and emotional than the any of the latest forms of communications.
In conclusion, even though internet-based communications are capable of connecting with more number of people with minimal efforts, they certainly lack any emotional bond with anyone that the traditional forms of communications can make.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, similarly, so, still, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57419354839 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19934956969 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564516129032 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1324220502 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.923076923 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157292984742 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05474201215 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391535614183 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100872551028 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376170563465 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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