Dear John,
Hope you’re getting on okay in London! Just writing to suggest you find a job.
It sounds like you’re having a tough time deciding on this college issue. It’s a difficult choice, I know, but if I were you, I’d hold off on the studies for the time being. With the crazy cost of tuition here and little time left over to work, I feel you might struggle to make ends meet. And that wouldn’t be any fun!
Here’s what I would do: first of all, I’d find a job as quickly as possible. Then, I’d open a savings account and deposit at least a little bit every month. If you do this, you’ll be able to work towards affording college without the financial pressure that would come with it if you went this year.
As for what kind of job to take, knowing you and your love of the outdoors, I’d recommend something in agriculture or conservation. Maybe even sports coaching… You did take that two-week course after all.
Anyway, if you want to talk it through in person, just let me know. Always happy to hear from you.
Best,
Matt
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... savings account and deposit at least a little bit every month. If you do this, you’ll be ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, if, may, so, then, after all, as for, at least, i feel, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5206185567 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24347638966 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690721649485 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6515456374 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7272727273 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 4.34317383033 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215202832704 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757708594616 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558952525064 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128199983585 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417348113812 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.35 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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