Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Someone finds the crease of drivers or riders is the best solution to decrease road accidents. In my opinion, I believe that road safety depends on several factors such as the age, awareness of participants, education and infrastructure.
On the one hand, increasing the minimum legal age for traffic participants makes roads safer. Firstly, vehicle controllers, who are not teenagers, have more years to learn much more knowledge of traffic. This helps them drive or ride correctly as they are educated. As a result, risks of joining traffic have gone down. Secondly, having more experiences allows adults to perceive obviously unwanted consequences of uncarefully controlling private transports. This leads to upgrading the awareness of traffic participants, therefore, threats of accidents which are caused by the vehicle controllers are reduced. A provisional summary, I partly agree that increasing the legal age of drivers of riders allows the road to be safe beside some following ways.
Secured roads not only depend on the older age of drivers or riders but also traffic infrastructure and legal fines. Specifically, the low quality of roads, unreasonable traffic lights are factors that can cause risks to moving on streets. For example, there are numerous high building and tall trees along the two roadsides in Hanoi and Ho Chi Minh city, the drivers and riders are obscured the vision. Some unfortunately problems result from falls of old trees in the rainstorm season in Ho Chi Minh city. So, constructing the high quality of infrastructure with the great master construction plan allows the participants to move on roads comfortably, thus roads are less dangerous. Additionally, the traffic participant could be worried about the heavy fines if they drive or ride vehicles illegally. So, the government should ban strict traffic regulations and invest more traffic cameras on the streets to record all illegal actions to send fine bills. This encourages traffic participants to comply with the road rule.
In conclusion, lifting the minimum legal age of street participants could make roads safer. However, synchronized traffic infrastructures and reasonable legal fines with strict monitoring systems also reduce unexpected consequences on streets and help commuting conveniently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 253, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to commute' or 'commute'.
Suggestion: to commute; commute
...pected consequences on streets and help commuting conveniently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5014084507 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03418857971 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580281690141 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9250194815 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.789473684 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6842105263 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47368421053 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181673408711 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605944413941 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713880169359 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11559453632 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036510344932 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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