Raising the minimum age requirement for drivers is considered the most effective way to improve road safety. While this approach can potentially reduce the number of road accidents involving inexperienced and immature drivers, I maintain that imposing stricter punishments for traffic violations and upgrading public transportation would be more feasible to address the root causes of road crashes.
Undoubtedly, increasing the minimum legal age for vehicle drivers can decrease some road accidents. In reality, young drivers lacking experience and maturity are more likely to engage in reckless and dangerous driving behaviours. This might put themselves and other commuters in danger. Requiring individuals to wait until they are older to obtain a formal driver’s license can encourage them to operate their vehicles more responsibly and cautiously. As a result, this contributes to a safer and more secure driving environment for all road users. For example, some countries, such as Japan and South Korea, where the minimum age for drivers is higher, have lower traffic accidents rates involving youngsters.
However, this measure does not fully address the underlying causes of traffic-based accidents. Moreover, these accidents can stem from various factors, including poor transport infrastructure and unreasonable penalties for breaking traffic laws, not solely from young commuters. Thus, enforcing harsh punishments for traffic violations, such as heavy fines and extended license suspensions, would serve as a deterrent to offenders from repeating violations. Further, the government should invest in improving public transportation, such as providing more bus and train services to encourage citizens to rely less on their own vehicles. Consequently, this could reduce the number of accidents on the roads. For example, the Mass Rapid Transit system in Singapore has significantly reduced traffic accidents by enforcing strict traffic laws and harsh penalties for traffic offenses, along with a well-established subway and train system.
In conclusion, although implementing a higher minimum age for drivers can improve road safety by reducing road accidents caused by immature drivers, introducing harsh penalties for traffic violations and improving public transport systems would deal with the underlying causes of these problems. I am also convinced that once these measures are implemented, there will be more people obeying these regulations, creating a safer driving environment for all commuters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2153.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85054347826 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03372734355 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.7424711787 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5625 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170119185983 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064000975902 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07749642964 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118877199872 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547586393207 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.95 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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