Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
For many years, experts have voiced a concern over the increasing crime rate in today's society. Therefore, some have advocated prolonging the prison duration as a punishment to decrease crime rate, while others have suggested different modalities to achieve this like studying the factors standing behind crimes. In my opinion, I contend that applying strategies other than extending punishment years would be more beneficial.
Crimes are always troublesome in any community. That is why, some psychologists have suggested sentencing criminals long duration in jail as this, as they say, will diminish the overall crime rate through several ways. Firstly, isolating those criminals in jail for long time will protect the community from their sinister deeds. Moreover, the long period those inmates will spend in prison will provide a great opportunity for rehabilitating them. To clarify more, this period could be used for educating those offenders and training them so they can get jobs after they spend their sentence years. a salient example is Japan where the crime rate has plummeted to an extremely low level thanks to prolongation of sentence years.
However, this strategy may not be the best since the unhealthy prison environment could create more aggressive criminals. Accordingly, the vast majority of psychologists have considered long prison years more harmful than advantageous regarding reducing crime. Consequently, various methods have been suggested to tackle the soaring number of crimes. It is well known that prevention is better than cure meaning studying the factors standing behind the crimes and fighting them would be definitely fruitful in surmounting the problem. For example, poverty, as well as unemployment, were found to be the main reasons for robbery and assault in France in 1940s. Years later and with the economic development these crimes have plunged to a very low level.
In conclusion, although isolating offenders in jails for a long period may temporary lower the crime rate, it is not, in my opinion, the best way. To my mind, it is high time the causes of crimes were dealt with so the crime rate will definitely decrease.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31395348837 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74802033075 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566860465116 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3329973407 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.529411765 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2352941176 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58823529412 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155045105001 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539347941057 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04201607599 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104860781851 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372523667313 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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