Some people think that a car is the best way to travel in cities while others believe a bicycle is a better way. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Undoubtedly, the progress in the means of transportation in the last century has been enormous and today we have numerous ways of transport within the cities. Many people prefer cars for intercity travel while other will debate that bicycle is more efficient way of travel.
This essay will discuss benefits and drawbacks of both points in details.

It is evident in large cities that people use cars for daily travel, specially, when they go to work. The reason mainly is that offices are located far distance from their residence. For instance, time taken to go and come back from work will be more if bicycle is used as mode of commute. Therefore, the benefits of travel by bicycle is over shadowed in this scenario.

Another point of view is importance of using bicycle as main course of travel. As per recent research from world health organization, the person who use bicycle have good heart beat rate as compared to those who use other means of transport. Indeed, it is a cost effective and environmental friendly if most of the people adapt to travel by bicycle.
Moreover, traffic problems will greatly be reduced by adapting bicycle.

However, bicycle has limitation of number of passengers, which is usually 2. While cars have capacity of more passengers and it depend of seats availability inside it. Also, for handicap people cars are most common way for their journey. So the advantages bicycle is outraged enormously by these features.

To sum-up, I personally believed that travel by cars is much more flexible than bicycle. Even though, bicycle has plenty of health benefits and less issue of maintenance but due to time of travel cars are more realiable. Furthermore, it depends on the people's choice and requirement.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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...ost common way for their journey. So the advantages bicycle is outraged enormousl...
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...aliable. Furthermore, it depends on the peoples choice and requirement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0412371134 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66007794819 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584192439863 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9895681535 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.5 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275609467061 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811947767679 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668686574764 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120128375609 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682925210336 0.056905535591 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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