Some people think cars are better way of transportation around the city. While, other prefer cycling. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
It is often argued which type of transport is more feasible, a car or a cycle. While it is worth considering that car is the fasted and most convenient way, cycles are also the cheaper and more eco-friendly mode of traveling. This essay will take a look at both sides of the argument before reaching a concrete decision.
To commence with cars, many support the view that they have some irreplaceable benefits compared to the cycles. If one has to reach somewhere real quick, with no doubt, their preference would be a car. In addition, it can also cover the long route trips without much effort and keep the driver relaxed due to the comforts and facilities provided. For instance, my family has four members who made a two-hour-long trip to Hyderabad last weekend and we arrived at our destination before the expected hours, and more importantly, no one was tired among us because of the automatic transmission and comfortable seats.
Conversely, if someone is in search of affordable conveyance or cares about the environment, their priority will be certainly a bicycle. Of course, it is mechanical and does not consume any fuel, as a result, no toxic gas will be released into the air. Recent news reported by the Australian government states that Darwin city has the finest air quality amongst all of the cities owing to the residents who are switching to the cycles for traveling.
Taking everything into consideration, it is more likely that cars facilitate convenience and are also the quickest way to reach somewhere. However, it seems to me that cycle as a means of transport is an absolute imperative that is entirely justified as they are easier to purchase and do not have any harmful impact on the surroundings despite the lack of comforts and inability to travel for a long.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun support seems to be countable; consider using: 'many supports'.
Suggestion: many supports
...ete decision. To commence with cars, many support the view that they have some irreplacea...
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Line 5, column 363, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...city has the finest air quality amongst all of the cities owing to the residents who are s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, however, if, look, so, while, as to, for instance, in addition, no doubt, of course, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85993485342 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82793566576 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628664495114 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.0297958425 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.333333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140000528939 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481789821942 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406232026406 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807472909175 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385757015348 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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