Some people think the cheap air flight gives ordinary people more freedom. However, others think the cheap air flights should be banned because it pollutes the air and bring many other problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Business and travelling have been made tremendous development after the invention of the aircraft. Due to comfortability and speed commutation time, nowadays, demand for air flights are increasing and the cost also plays a crucial role. Section of people believes that because of these lower price of flights, people more prefer air transport while some deem that these cheap flights produce air pollution and several other problems that why it should be banned. The following essay discusses both the view very deeply and reaches a suitable conclusion.
air transportation services often used for travelling purposes as well as for work. after the globalisation, the use of these systems has been increased drastically. In the market, there are many flight providers are available and in this cutthroat competition, to attract the customer towards there services, they reduce prices of their ticket as give incentive to the people. consequently, the use of air flights is increased. as a result of this action, people of every class has the freedom to travel by aeroplane. In past, using this service was a dream for some people because of the expensive ticket cost. it also reduces the commutation time between two destinations and more, it provides a great amount of safety compared to road transportation. For instance, the last year survey which was conducted by Forbes magazine stated that the chances of an accident on road were extremely higher compared to the air transportation system.
On the flip side, these less costly flights produce a huge amount of the greenhouse gases as well it's detrimental effect pollute the environment on a high scale. these flights use cheap quality of fuel to cut down the fuel cost which produces deteriorate the environment. The tangible research showed that the plane who ran on the low quality of fuel produces 5 times more pollution than the high-grade fuel used the plane. however, government, nowadays, make some strict rule to curb this situation which every aeroplane company have to be followed.
weighing of the compelling arguments, there is a lot of benefit of cheap air flight over air pollution which is also controlled by strict government rule and regulation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, so, well, while, as for, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1870.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19444444444 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84960469427 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7972940121 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1764705882 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312570297969 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897195794081 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870787088048 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197250395622 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858819237949 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.