Some people think children can learn effectively by watching TV and they should be encouraged to watch TV at both home and school. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
learning is a never ending process and therefore we learning from womb to tomb.From past few decades is has been observed that television enhance the knowledge of adolescent with leaps and bounds.Here,I agree with the given statement that school should encourage pupil to watch television.
one school of thought reckon that television in this neo era is like a basic need of mankind all around the globe.To illustrates,numbers of shows are being telecasted on silver scree everyday where pupil choose their favourite channels as well as shows and they follow their prominent celebrity which inspire them to toil hard.Beside this by watching ample of reality shows,juvenile start taking parts in such shows and can earn name and fame.As a result,kids should encourage to watch television.Moreover,silver screen enhance the creativity of the children and they gets the tips about the fitness,education etcetera.
Moving further,television keeps up to date adolescent with entire world where they come to know about current affairs and helps them in every thick and thin.Hence,children should encourage to watch news channel,Beside this school should make a proper schedule to give the opportunity to the juvenile to watch inspirational videos because it has long lasting effect.Thence,it broaden the horizon of one's mind.Moreover,channels such as Discovery,History are very lucrative for the adolescent because these channels contain vast of knowledge.
Another school of thought deem that,plethora of health disorder are being created by watching excess silver screen.Moreover,some programmes have negative impact on the kinder and by sitting in front of television around the clock also have bad effects on eyesight.Beside this,by having large number of television channels,distracts the mind of the adolescent from studies.Hence,parents and tutor should not encourage the pupil to watch the television.
To recapitulate,it is rightly said that without television life would be like soup without salt. There is no doubt that television has plethora of health issues.However,it have ample of pros regarding to the education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72012578616 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.84459523787 2.80592935109 137% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591194968553 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 199.773760929 49.4020404114 404% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 303.166666667 106.682146367 284% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.0 20.7667163134 255% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.3333333333 7.06120827912 274% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 5.01903807615 797% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203312424571 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918434849806 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568372105477 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108611660659 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462110224236 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.0 13.0946893788 244% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.22 50.2224549098 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 11.3001002004 222% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.78 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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