Some people think that children should be encouraged to participate in team activities while other think that it is good to play individual sports. Discuss both sides.
Team activities play a magnificent role in everyone's life to make them noble character. Presently,it is argued that team activities are more superior than individual ones as the group activities inculcate prominent skills to human beings for a prosperous life.Here,I would like to accord with given statement.
There are multifarious points to support my point of view.First and foremost,team activities play a magnificent rule to bring confidence in every human.To justify, one get so much help and appreciation from other team members.As a result, one get encouraged to give his best to his team.Moreover, people can get so much experience about the activity which he\she does in group.To be specific, in team activity a lot of people of different age groups take part and share their experiences with one another.Consequently,people can get a mine of knowledge and can elaborate their skills.
Further emphasizing on my point of view, people can learn beneficial aspects of life such as team spirit ,spirit of never give up ,how to tackle with extreme circumstances and many more while performing in a team activity.Apart from it ,people can understood the value of fraternity,leadership and sense of cooperation.Hence,team activity is the superior way to teach human beings about social and moral values.By contrast, some conflicting views are also there.
Numerous points can be detailed which supports individual activities.Initially,individual activities play a mandatory role in everyone's life to provide knowledge about responsibility.For example,while performing alone activities one has to do all the planning and working.Besides this , one has to manage all the timing and has to lift all the weight of activity on his shoulders Therefore, one can understood that how responsibilities are fulfilled.
To recapitulate,participation in the vernacular activities is lucrative for all around development of children.Undeniably,both the activities have their own significance .However,I still believe that team activities are more important than solo activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, apart from, as to, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69579288026 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.23925955092 2.80592935109 151% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566343042071 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 169.376962883 49.4020404114 343% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 293.333333333 106.682146367 275% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.5 20.7667163134 248% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.5 7.06120827912 347% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234715202897 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125316262028 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0209457570987 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13520447789 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203137008538 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.2 13.0946893788 238% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.79 50.2224549098 6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.3001002004 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.67 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 9.78957915832 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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