Some people think that children should be studying all the mandatory subjects until the age of ten, while others believe they should have an option to select favourite subjects to study. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your experience.
Many individuals suppose that juveniles need to take all compulsory courses until grade 5, however, others oppose that they should be given a choice to decide what classes they are going to study. In this essay, I will explore both views and give my point of view.
On the one hand, mandatory courses form a firm basis, hence it benefits adolescents by the fact that they will use the acquired knowledge in other favourite subjects. To illustrate, I use handy techniques, which I was taught in elementary school in my current studies, such as measurements and basic calculations that I learned in Maths. They are advantageous in my Computer Science and Physics classes.
At the same time, an opportunity to have a free choice between different courses is essential for children because they can spend more time on the subjects they enjoy. If a child adores drawing, playing the instrument or acting, a more rational solution is that he or she spends all the time performing what they are keen on. Furthermore, elective classes help young students to broaden their horizons, thus they can attempt different areas of studies and decide what they are interested in and study it in the future. In my experience, many of my friends are appreciative that they had an opportunity to try themselves in subjects that they would never take, as a result, they connected their careers with them.
In conclusion, although children should be obliged to study essential courses, such as Mathematics, English and Science to use earned experience in other fields, I believe that every young student should have an option to learn what they want.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72513142939 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602189781022 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.0475258613 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262089466836 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939359891957 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717450301456 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157462835768 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650249411424 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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