Some people think that children should go to kindergarten before attending primary school, while others believe that is better for children to stay all day with their families. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is often argued that going to kindergarten is essential before going continuing to elementary school, while others take the opposite view by saying that staying with family thorough the day is more important. In my opinion, both views have their benefits, but kindergarten would be advantageous for kid whose parents are working.
On the one hand, kindergarten is considered as a critical stage in children schooling because it can create better foundation to achieve great result in primary school. Preschool students learn alphabets and numbers, which is sometime not possible at home, in fun methods. For instance, in many cases, pupils in kindergarten sing alphabetical and numeric songs to easily memorize them. Besides, Children will gain some soft skills such as socializing and cooperation in teamwork. Therefore, children graduated from kindergarten will be more likely to have high confidence when attend primary school.
On the other side, some argue that it is imperative for children to stay with their family all day rather than spending time in pre-school. Early age is a golden time to create stronger bounding between parents and children. Moreover, parents at home also might be capable to teach their kid some soft and hard skills. In my opinion, although numbers and alphabets are possible to learn at house, working parents are less likely to have enough time to conduct home learning for their kids. So, sending their children to kindergarten is the best option.
In conclusion, sending children to kindergarten would be advantageous in preparing them for better performance in elementary school while staying with family all day can strengthen the bounding between parents and children. In my opinion, while both options have positive effects, working parents might consider pre-school as a better option to educate their children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in many cases, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37883959044 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78274017973 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549488054608 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7098770196 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.571428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424948221673 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146186087289 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991186862557 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276753137986 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551983312566 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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