Some people think that children should start school as early as possible, while others belive that they should not start at the age of seven. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Although, it is thought by some persons that children should join school in early age and other persons' are opinion that children should not start before the age of seven. In my opinion they must join the school as early as.
On the one hand, there are few reasons why some people opine that if children will have be started school in early age then they will have more knowledge. Another is in now days technology is increasing day by day so they can learn more advance land they will have more experence in technology like computer but they should join the school after the age of 5 because according to science before the age of 5 the childrens' mind is devopment till tha age of 5.
On the other hand, there are two reasons that why children join the school at the age of 7. Firstly, if they have a enough time to develop their other skills that's why therefore have more other skills. Secondly, they will not be nature therefore they have enough understanding power also they can make them better learners among the people and if they have any skill,they can make their career in it skill and also they will have enough knowledge about how to talk with other children and how to stay among the children.
In recapitulation,if they will join the school in early age they have more benefits so i think as per above reasons children must join the school as early as possible.
- Some people think that children should start school as early as possible while others belive that they should not start at the age of seven Discuss both the views and give your opinion 38
- Some people think that children should start school as early as possible while others believe that they should start at the age of seven Discuss both the views and give your opinion 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, i think, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49402390438 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2884831146 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458167330677 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.0 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.2621665377 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.0 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.375 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.875 7.06120827912 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330373376808 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186588827951 0.084324248473 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100878926101 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24700728704 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106527695192 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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