Some people think that children who spend alot of time reading children's story books are wasting their time which could be better used doing other more useful activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Children are said to waste too much time which should have been spent all on outdoor activities and sports instead of story books. Personally, I believe that time ought to be arranged for both extracurricular activities and story books since each of them is beneficial to children.
At the outset, comic trips bring children useful lessons from early age. Obviously, children's books are often fairy tales where good, bad characters and magic details exist. Therefore, after each story, children will acknowledge and imitate right actions as well as criticize evil deeds. Moreover, reading story books has great influence on children's future study. Specifically, on utilizing comic trips, the brain works constantly to imagine everything in the comic books, which makes the brain smarter and more sensitive. This is the vital key for infants to achieve success more easily.
However, children are not capable of pushing ahead pnly by reading story books. They need to take part in outdoor activities and play sports, too .Besides developing thinking and mind, physical training is extremely significant. According to The Wall Street Journal ( WSJ) - a famous American newspaper, there are 3 out of every 5 children suffer obesity, which indicates that the overweight rate in children seems to rise. To keep fit, what they should do is engaging in daily activities. Besides, by means of participating in physical recreation, children will have chances to meet more types of people. As a result, they will be more skillful in behaving and get more friends. For instance, a child who regularly participates in physical activities will be able to deal with various situations as well as communicate with people twice as well as children who stay at house all day.
To sum up, spending time on story books is not totally bad but time should be also used for outdoor activites. Only by this way, can infants develope comprehensively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17252396166 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7442122809 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626198083067 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3083720521 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2352941176 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328535198261 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934368460311 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589752513697 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190484196802 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168665000686 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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