Some people think climate changes has a negative impact on business while others think that it produces more business options. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
In contemporary settings, environmental changes become usual due to adverse effect of human activities. Therefore, some people believe that there is adverse impact on business due to changes in climate. However, some masses and I personally consider that there is more opportunities for business sectors to increase their production. In the upcoming paragraphs, both views points become discussed.
To begin with, according to some individuals, climate change shows negative impact on every sector of business due to some reasons. First of all, small scale business such as animal husbandry and crop productions so on become affected due to environmental changes. For instance, if there is heavy rainfall come in any area, which leads to hilarious for the production of crops. Because, due to this, excess of water stores in the fields which effects the roots of crops and therefore the yielding become low. Moreover, this also leads to soil erosion which brings down the fertility of soil amd their valuable nutrients.
On contrast, in agreement with others individuals, climate change become a great opportunity for career sectors. Firstly, when in summer, the days become too hot. Due to this, the production of electronics become increases because of high demand of refrigerator, air conditioning and so on. As a result, the shopkeepers sell more these items and earn their high vages. In addition to this, pollution become hot potatoes in today's world. Dur to which, air become unhygienic and contains more gases. Therefore, by analysing this problem, legal authorities manage air purifiers and other equipments to healthier the environment. As a result, this climate change become beneficial to those industries. Lastly, if there is drought come in any area, then this becomes lead to water scarcity. As a result, masses start rain water harvesting which becomes valuable to ecology too.
To recapitulate, I personally consider that, environmental changes have good for tune for business sectors because there are too many benefits in comparison to destruction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 256, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are more opportunities'?
Suggestion: there are more opportunities
...e masses and I personally consider that there is more opportunities for business sectors to increase their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, moreover, so, then, therefore, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39197530864 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90051705075 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558641975309 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9368308008 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.35 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162910390597 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560789430536 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722248335543 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116492675175 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643789497421 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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