‘Pollution explosion,no doubt,is a monster that swallow every type of progress made by human beings’.there are several factors which are contributed to control heterogeneous type of pollution as (on the earth,in the air and in the water) ectetera.moreover,who are answerable to deminish pollution either private and general public or authorities?I partially accord with this statement and will discuss my distinct views in coming forth coming paragraphs.
To inititate,in the hodiernal era,individuals reckon that most of the pollution created by factories owners and society.They utilise poisons chemicals to manufacture products like plastic bags,colouring clothes and so on.And remaining chemicals are released in the rivers ,ponds and canals.Furthermore,people use immense natural resources such as (coal,gas,oil) which are abhyshmal for air).They should reduce overutilisation on heavy vichels as trucks,aeroplanes,cars etcectera.
Secondly,opponts argue that governments should participate to decline the level of pollution.They should organise awareness camps for all humankind. They should promote electric cars, wind power energy and solar panels which are intensely helpful to clean up pollution. Taxe Slabes should be made as per rules and regulation.A fine exame population exploration day by day and plants are cutting for people’s shelter but authorise has to take inisative steps to reduce these crisis
In culmination,i would like to say that cleaning pollution has plethora of bans for individuals but mankinds cannot do alone both have to utilise equate knowledge to reduce it
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03056768559 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.84241760753 2.80592935109 137% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.698689956332 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 154.445589124 49.4020404114 313% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 276.2 106.682146367 259% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.8 20.7667163134 221% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.8 7.06120827912 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183789754526 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094876745003 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0219749904751 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100252507186 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02602768206 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.9 13.0946893788 228% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.42 50.2224549098 1% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.58 12.4159519038 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.87 8.58950901804 138% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 9.78957915832 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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