Advancement in technology has upper hand over many things, however, it mostly influence children's quality of education. Technical advancement like computer and internet helps children to study in perfect manner but many people oppose by admiring teacher and school as a better option for children to obtain knowledge. This essay will discuss why, the internet and computers are relevant way to study but why other believes that teachers could be a better alternative.
To begin with, internet contains enormous amount of knowledge and reliable resources and boundaries of internet are limitless thus students can take advantage of that knowledge for their studies. The reson behind the fact that, due to advancement in technology, computers can perform many tasks at once and in addition internet works like backbone. For instance, internet has varities of techniques for studying. Thus, it can ve said that, the internet and computers are considered as a positive aspects for children's study.
On the other hand, many people's opinion get changed when it comes to practical knowledge and experience, they consider school and an education that provide by tutor. The main reason is that, teachers have more practical knowledge as well as experience in studying more than that they concentrate on morality. For example, those who have gathered knowledge from the internet has a short sence of knowledge as compared to those who studied under a teacher. It can be seen that, teachers and school has more influence on children's lives.
It is fortunate that, internet and computers has some advancement from which children would be able to educate. It is indeed that internet and computers are frequently used by every other children but it would better to get educated by teacher at schools. In my opinion, schools and teachers are an important asset in children's education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7264364206 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526666666667 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1710664774 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317352115883 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12117754918 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534949909229 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200018694971 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274565372088 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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