The issue of whether tourists spots should charge visitors has sparked off an intense debate.While optimists argued that this can have a positive impact on the local culture,I believe it will do damage to traditional culture.
Some supporters claimed that using these long-history remains to attract tourists here to make money is the only method of keeping them.One of the reasons is that the money spent by visitors could be used to repair or improve those spots.For example,the Great Wall ,which is considered to be one of the most important tourists attractions,need a large amounts of money to fix bricks on the wall.Furthermore,it allows people to have a better understanding of the local traditions,thereby making these traditions appreciated by people from all over the world.As a result,cultural traditions could be preserved as famous attractions.
On the other hand,I agree with the idea that taking advantage of these attractions can be harmful to them.Firstly,these remains may lose their traditional features in order to satisfy their visitors,because tourists can be bored with these historical buildings if there is no modern facility in them.In addition,some uncivilized people can cause great damage to the attractions ,such as making marks,walking on the grass,stealing precious things and so on.Finally,people who live in there areas will not willing to visit these attractions frequently due to the fact that it can cost them a large sum of money.At last,these traditions will disappear.
In conclusion,I would argue that traditional buildings and attractions should not be treated as scenic spots which earn the money of visitors.
- Some people think that cultural traditions will be destroyed if they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others, however, believe that is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 22
- Some people think that cultural traditions will be destroyed if they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others, however, believe that is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4765625 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.477176912 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6015625 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 20.2975951904 315% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 229.978803371 49.4020404114 466% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 350.5 106.682146367 329% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.0 20.7667163134 308% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 34.5 7.06120827912 489% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278498565943 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146332590061 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076345740899 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146332590061 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076345740899 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.4 13.0946893788 278% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.94 50.2224549098 -4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.4 11.3001002004 260% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.39 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.07 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.1190380762 273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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