Sports plays one of the crucial role in every nation.A section of society claim that violent sports should be banned whereas others not agree with that. I disagree with thise statement because every sports has involved little dangerous and choosing the sports reflects the freedom of player.
To begin with, choosing the career in sports which completely depends on player choice.firstly, There is no need to ban any dangerous sports,beacuse the players chosed games according to their will even it is dangerous. For instance, surfers know their game is involved highly risk even a single mistake happen. The passion about surfing Leads them to play that. Banning games will affect the freedom of the nationalities. Secondly, I honestly believe that sports provide employment to the people.even the people's are full time athletics or just fun time players. Thise can help the nation somehow reducing enemployment problem. To exemplify, we can see lot of surfers teach the surfing in beach side. So many tourists interested to learn this crazy game even though it is for little time. Moreover, with those self employment surfers are happy to do their passion even if it has indulge risk.
However, every sports has its own risk level.When it comes to ban the dangerous sports it's realt hard to devide risky and non risky sports. One main reason to not to ban dangerous sports are
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, honestly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06550218341 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55332705182 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624454148472 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.940853084 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2307692308 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 43.0 5.01903807615 857% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181635627694 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616324188529 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708066048717 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143835838411 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758392783414 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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