Mobiles are intended to invited to to connect people easily. It is thought by few people's mobile phones are create people's are less communicate. I agree that today most of people's using technology in a wrong way like utmost use of mobile without outside invoulment.
It is evident that mobiles help us communicate folks entire world. Individual can share information easily and maintain friendship and communicate quine of the world. Furthermore it's leads to peoples isolated from society beacuase of overtime using of phone between the four walls. For instance, peoples tend to more interest like facebook and tinder while using such kind of floks spend their time even people they see atleast once consequently they disconnected to the local community. The another reason is that children suffred with isolation because parents spend most of their time with mobile thus they fail to give quality of time to their children.it leads to children insecurity and isolation and they prone to get easily depression.
One the flip side , mobile give us huge benefits to the individuals, it can easily connect with their dear ones. Not like previous information can be pass between the people's very effectively. Mobiles are the technological revolution, if the individual use mobile appropriately it can give immense benefits to them like online shopping, digital marketing, mobile banking etc. Even though the the mobile has huge benefits I completely agree with this essay mobile making people's stubborn and less productive and more isolated with society as well as family
To conclude, technology provides huge benefits if we know how to use it properly. People's are intend to use phones in wronge way which makes them unsociable, and depressed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, while, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71479638759 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557142857143 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.7679528289 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.076923077 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 75.0 5.01903807615 1494% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269203976321 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114862659377 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08477253914 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190923193079 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865540103668 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.