Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries .Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities toward protecting the environment .
Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.
Climate change is a major problem that was caused by humans all over the world. Humans were the reason to why the climate has changed, so that everyone is held responsible for the actions taken to cause change in weather. This essay will discuss two sides: some people are convinced that developed countries should carry the burden more than less developed but others think that everyone is equally responsible.
To begin with, developed countries are wealthier than less developed countries. It’s widely known; that improving the environment is costly, so since the developed countries suffer from minor problems and they have the money these countries should solve the problem. For example, people shouldn’t expect from Syria to spend money on solving the change in weather while it has more important priorities, like providing shelters for the poor people.
On the other hand, the developed countries’ populations weren’t the only ones responsible for climate alternation. Therefore, they shouldn’t be the ones paying for the cost of their open actions and others. In addition, if only the developed countries paid it would add a burden on the government, adding a burden on their citizens making them pay taxes. As a result, if every country paid a small percentage it won’t cause more problems on the developed countries. For instance, if USA, France, and Russia each one of them paid 10% and Ethiopia paid 3%, so it is a small amount paid that won’t cause any future problems.
To sum up, we are all humans and we should be more responsible for our actions and the consequences, thereby not allowing the richer paying for the mistakes the poor caused. The developed countries are richer so they should pay a slightly higher percentage than the rest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15753424658 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77853295025 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530821917808 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.734771561 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.846153846 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337293191471 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13318767169 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978156082196 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216323214058 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060160276813 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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